Almost every problem–solution response ends the same way: “the government should do something about it”. The phrase proposes nothing, and it appears at exactly the moment the essay was supposed to deliver its most valuable content. What makes it so common is that it feels like a proposal while you are writing it — it has a subject, a modal and an object, and it is grammatically indistinguishable from a real one.
A proposal is only worth marks if the reader can see the action: who does what, to what, with what. “Allocate” forces you to name where the money comes from; “phase out” forces you to name the timescale; “prioritise” forces you to admit something else gets less, which is what makes it an argument rather than a wish. The verb does the work that “do something about” avoids.
The grammar is small and specific. “Implement” takes a policy or a scheme — something with a plan behind it — and cannot take an abstract noun: you cannot implement awareness. “Subsidise” takes its object directly, with no preposition. “Allocate” takes a resource and then “to” plus a purpose.
“Everybody should” is nobody. A proposal needs somebody who can carry it out.
“Allocate a share of fuel duty” is a proposal. “Invest more” is a wish.
Implement a scheme, not awareness. Subsidise families, not “to families”.
“Phase out” is often more defensible than “ban”, and it is one verb instead of a clause.
